Score: 10

"Hell :P"

submission: 1000 frames of boredom

date: January 13, 2008

Do you still use MX 2004, not flash 8/CS3?
Anyway, i found it intresting, through i cant belive you did 55 seconds of lines :)
Oh also, how you come you your 14 here, but 16 in your profile, unless this is 2 years old... Its a pity you havnt got this to work back on it.

~Sam

Score: 1

"GAH"

submission: Xilias 04

date: January 3, 2008

Look... you will never be decent if you carry on like this.. look at my review in episode one and folow that.... Spend at least 6 hours on this..

Score: 5

"Sigh"

submission: Xilias 01

date: January 2, 2008

Im giving you 5 because of the vast improving you could do...

Bad things
Frankly it was bad... No menu, voice syncing just looped...no voice actors.. The teleportion spell was rushed and such...

Good things/ways to improve
Get a voice actors, tonnes of forums, here on newgrounds, stickpage, you can get plenty fast...
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /320038
This will help you make great backgrounds.... Take your time... Im giving you a low score but in the dututre, with more time, you could nock it up!
this will help: It has a good teleportion effect+great blood
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /402639

And this:
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /334368

Thanks, you can be a great animater, just work on it

Score: 0

"Umm..."

submission: Smiley Shooter

date: December 9, 2007

You have a AS error, try play it yourself

Score: 8

"Its ok..."

submission: =Simple Button Tutorial=

date: December 9, 2007

1. It does look a bit rushed..mabey more colours?
2.Theres so many button tuts...uh
3.But it IS good, and well done!

Score: 8

"Not bad"

submission: Crazy Car

date: December 9, 2007

Nice simple, intresting game! Not my style..but nice!