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Hell :P
Do you still use MX 2004, not flash 8/CS3?
Anyway, i found it intresting, through i cant belive you did 55 seconds of lines :)
Oh also, how you come you your 14 here, but 16 in your profile, unless this is 2 years old... Its a pity you havnt got this to work back on it.
~Sam
GAH
Look... you will never be decent if you carry on like this.. look at my review in episode one and folow that.... Spend at least 6 hours on this..
Sigh
Im giving you 5 because of the vast improving you could do...
Bad things
Frankly it was bad... No menu, voice syncing just looped...no voice actors.. The teleportion spell was rushed and such...
Good things/ways to improve
Get a voice actors, tonnes of forums, here on newgrounds, stickpage, you can get plenty fast...
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /320038
This will help you make great backgrounds.... Take your time... Im giving you a low score but in the dututre, with more time, you could nock it up!
this will help: It has a good teleportion effect+great blood
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /402639
And this:
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /334368
Thanks, you can be a great animater, just work on it
Its ok...
1. It does look a bit rushed..mabey more colours?
2.Theres so many button tuts...uh
3.But it IS good, and well done!
1. I was going to add more colors but I didn't know which ones to put it to make it look nice.
2. Well I added lots of buttons for the examples. I never thought about making them smaller tho =\
3. Thank you ^_^
Not bad
Nice simple, intresting game! Not my style..but nice!
Age 31, Male
Animater
Blue
Flash 8, Not CS3
Joined on 12/9/07
1000 frames of boredom 
Xilias 04 
=Simple Button Tutorial= 
Crazy Car